I mean this is not blind obviously, but it feels unnaturally enthusiastic/conversational to me. Maybe for like an video script it would fit, but for a requirements document or something it is a little oddly 'sauced up', as if someone put an extra pass through it to try to make it entertaining to read.
I was trying to make it sound like a college student with no strong writing experience.
I use to work at AWS (Professional Services) and there are a few different writing styles depending on what your audience was. I learned how to write in the different “house styles” before LLMs were a thing. So I know when something doesn’t sound right.
I use LLMs all of the time to write. I’m 99% certain that no one can tell the difference between my writing 100% without an LLM to my writing with one
